Monday, 14 December 2009

Music Video ( First Draft ) done by Ayshia

This is the first draft of our music video.


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  2. Teacher Comments:

    - First 3 seconds of the video is good but afterwards things seem to get a bit confused.

    -The narrative needs to be much clearer, what is the song/video about?

    -You must have a clear image of the artist that you are trying to portray through this video.

    -Try to film in more locations as it appears to be quite limited.

    -Maybe add some performance in the video.

    -Currently a D

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  3. More Teacher Comments:

    - Needs to perform to the camera

    - Need to make sure he knows the lyrics fully

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