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Teacher Comments:- First 3 seconds of the video is good but afterwards things seem to get a bit confused.-The narrative needs to be much clearer, what is the song/video about?-You must have a clear image of the artist that you are trying to portray through this video.-Try to film in more locations as it appears to be quite limited.-Maybe add some performance in the video.-Currently a D
More Teacher Comments:- Needs to perform to the camera- Need to make sure he knows the lyrics fully
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ReplyDelete- First 3 seconds of the video is good but afterwards things seem to get a bit confused.
-The narrative needs to be much clearer, what is the song/video about?
-You must have a clear image of the artist that you are trying to portray through this video.
-Try to film in more locations as it appears to be quite limited.
-Maybe add some performance in the video.
-Currently a D
More Teacher Comments:
ReplyDelete- Needs to perform to the camera
- Need to make sure he knows the lyrics fully